Raymonds run story bored
Öykü Penceresi Metni
- Exposition
- Raymond no dont do that. We have to go this way. Stop raymond. I have to practice to race
- Ok Okay ill come
- Inciting Incident
- What is Raymond doing with you? Is he training to. HAHAHAHAH
- ''Look who it is. Squeaky and Raymond. Training hard huh squeaky ? Watch this time I'm going to win the race ''
- ''What grade you in now, Raymond ?''What are you his mother ?
- Rising Action
- Watch im going to win again. You guys are all going to loose.
- You got anything to say to my brother,you say it to me. That's right Fatso. And the next word to come out of anybody and ill be there mother to.
- Squeaky is a young girl committed to her running and lives in New York City. She has to take care of her older brother Raymond, who has a disability.
- Climax
- Squeaky trains hard for her race and comes across Gretchen and her sidekicks
- Falling action
- Gretchen and here friends bullied Raymond when squeaky and Raymond were training.
- Resolution
- Goof jib squeaky. You did great out there. Im proud of you.
- Thanks Gretchen. Told you i will win. Maybe me and you can help Raymond become a better runner . We can coach him he will be great
- Grechen and squeaky go against eachother in a race. When squeaky is running she saw raymond also running.
- READY STEADY GO GO GO GO !!!!!
- Squeaky come first grechen came second. Squeaky won the race against grechen.
- Squeaky saw Raymond ran and was surprised that he was able to keep up in the race. Squeaky want's to coach Raymond in running and wants grechen to help. Shes friends with Gretchen now because gretchen shows good sportsmanship.
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