Peighton Lawson A Long Way Down
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- SHAWN!!!!!
- I am gonna figure out who killed my brother.
- Hi I'm William Hollagon, but to my friends and people I know it's just Will. Today was rhe saddest day in my life. It was the day of my older brother Shawn's death. So many thoughts were running through my brain but I knew if Shawn were here he would want me to keep pushing through.
- Oh my gosh. I do remember her. That day was when she died. I was heartbroken that day.
- I'm Dani, remeber me from the playground and the school?
- This feels like a dream. My dad died a few years ago. How is he standing in front of me right now!? He must be inside my head.
- I wanted to find out who killed Shawn. There were so many different emotions running through my head. But mostly anger. Shawn had played a huge role in my life. And I wasn't going to let whoever killed him get away with it. I think I had a feeling I knew who did it though.
- Dad is that you?!
- Will, don't make the same mistake as me. You don't need to get revenge. You going to be ok I promise.
- I wasen't the one who killed your brother.
- Where I'm from there was always 3 rules you hasdto follow. Number 1- crying, don't no matter what. Number 2- snitching, dont't no matter what. And finally Number 3- revenge, if someone you love gets killed, find the person who killed them and kill them. There was a kid in the neighbor hood named Carolson Riggs . But everyone called him Riggs. I had this weird gut feeling that he might have been there or was the person who killed my brother. So I decided to go to his appartment and confront him about it.
- SHAWN!!!!! I know who killed you it was Riggs, or at least I think its Riggs.
- Shawn and Riggs were so called friends . The only good thing Riggs ever did to Shawn was teach him how to do the Penny Drop. Which was like a flip off the monkey bars. Riggs kept talking about how he wasn't the one who killed my brother. A few minutes passed by and then a girl came into the elevator. I didnt remember her until she told me her name. Her name was Dani and she showed me a picture of us when we were younger. And then the moment when she got killed replayed in my head. She also started telling me why I should not just seek revenge on the killer.
- Oh yeah. I cried so much that day. Your friendship meant the world to me.
- I was really nervous about confronting the person who killed my brother. My dad died a few years ago becasue he was in a similar situation. His brother was killed too, so he decided to find the killer and kill them. He ended up killing the wrong person and then he was killed. I knew my dad wasn't actually standing next to me but I couls feel his presence inside the elevator.
- Even Though I really wanted to get revenge on the person who killed Shawn, it wouldn't have been the right choice. Also after seeing Dani, and my dad even though they all died in my past they still played an important role in my life. They helped me decide on not killing the wrong person. After seeing Shawn crying I knew that he would not want me to kill anyone. THE END!!!
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