Dear Ms Evans I noticed that I did bad on your last test and was wondering if i could please have a re take thank you for your understanding.
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Ms. Evans I dis SOOOOOOOOO bad on that test you gave us can PLSSSSSSSS have a retake your the best :-)-Ella
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Dear Mr. White I forgot to inform you that I have a late soccer game tonight and my homework will be turned in late I am sorry.thank you for understanding
Mr. White My homework is going to be turned in so late i'm sorry i forgot i have this and this blah blah blah.