My name is Hazel Elizabeth Deborah Parker (Aka Squeaky). I love to run. Here is My brother Raymond. Everyone says that I am older, but I am actually younger then him! I have to take care of him because he needs a little help.
Hello my name is Raymond and I have a disability.
Rising action (The part when they introduce the antagonist)
you have such a big head Raymond ! (The antagonist Gretchen and Mary)Unlike you squeaky i have to get ready with my fancy things for the race i am going to. beat you in!
Ugh why do you do this all the time! Stop talking about him and go through me.
Huh??
Rising action
I know right she is so trash
HA you so bad and you look mad dumb and watch me win the race the next day AHAHAH.
Ugh you guys are such bullies and stop talking so much and fight me!
Climax
Man i hate this people expect me to do things that I do not want to do . I wish that i was in the country where it is relaxing.
Falling Action
ready for me to beat you in this race you loser! Just watch me beat you
yea yea
Lose so other people will play
You did great
Resolution
I feel that iI should help Raymond out for him to be a good runner too!
you did great too!!!
Raymond'sRun
that was pretty impressive I respect you for that.
By:Nabil Islam
The Moral of the story is to be who you are and not care what other people say about you