Raymond's Run: Dylan Nazario
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- Exposition
- This story takes place in New York City. Its sometime in the 2010's. The person to the left is Squeaky and the person to the right is Raymond.
- Rising Action
- I don't think your going to win the race this year Squeaky.
- I am going to win the race this year and leave Raymond out of this.
- Climax
- Nope, I have a reputation to uphold.
- Squeaky maybe you should let someone else win this year. You've been winning for the past several years. The number of people trying to join in the race is dropping fast.
- This is the part where Squeaky explains how she takes care of her brother Raymond in New York and is very fast for a 10-year-old.
- Falling Action
- Gretchen isn't that bad. And Raymond is keeping up with me!
- One day as Squeaky is walking through NYC they cross paths with Gretchen and her gang people that she's helped out before but still have a problem with her. They try to mess with her about her losing the race. Then tries to mess with Raymond which Squeaky shuts down instantly.
- Resolution
- Squeaky wins the race with Gretchen in second place! And Raymond kept the same pace as Squeaky!
- Squeaky gets to a race and the Guy in charge tries to hint towards Squeaky letting someone else win because no one is really volunteering to join the race because she wins every year. But, she responds in her own cocky way and doesn't care and says "I have a reputation to uphold"
- Lesson
- Raymonds pretty good at running what if I coach him?
- Squeaky wins!
- When the race takes off Squeaky is in the lead but she notices Gretchen doing good as well and doing all the stretches and breathing exercises which starts to change her opinion of her. But that's not all, Raymond is running besides Squeaky keeping up with her besides the race track. Which surprises her.
- Squeaky wins the race again. With Gretchen close behind in second. And Raymond at the finish line with her. She thinks highly of Gretchen after this seeing how well she did. And is proud of Raymond as well for keeping up.
- In the end, Squeaky decides to Coach Raymond seeing his potential. And becomes friends with Gretchen. The end!
- Gretchen did pretty good too.
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