In ancient china their lived a family of three the mom, sister and brother and dad but the dad is at war.They are unhappy because their dad is going to war for months.
Approach
Here is your sword for being the winer
No I diservet
The call to adventure in my story is that the father named chin is going to war to protect ancient china. Chins family doesn't want him to leave.
Slave them emperor
At your orders
Im not going to fight any more
The mentor in the story is Qin Shi Huangdi. The test that chin has to go through is that if he can actually have the skills to fight and kill. Then the enemies is Chun Chung and Shing Chung.
Here emperor i dont need the sword
Why
Your back dad
Your back now Chin
The approach in the story is that they are fighting to see who is the best ether Chin, Chun Chung or Shing Chung. Then the ordeal is that Chin is trying to concur to win Chun Chung and Shing Chung in wining the sword. The Reward is that the emperor gives Chin a sword that he can fight with because he won.
The atonenment in the story is that Chin is trying to slave the enemies because they were saying that no i deserved the sword not you only me.
The Return in the story is that Chin comes back with his family and Chin decides that he is going to return the sword and not fight ever again and want to go back with his family.