Raymond Run Plot
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- Exposition
- Squeaky is a 10 year old girl in New York. She loves running and does it every chance she gets. Her only responsibility is taking care of her brother Raymond who is autistic
- Inciting Incident
- Squeaky is competing in the Mayday race with Gretchen and wants to win and beat her but also feels annoyed that People like Cynthia Proctor and Gretchen are not being genuine and truthful.
- Gretchen is smiling but its not a smile
- Rising Action
- Squeaky is serious about running and practicing for the race so she can win. Gretchen and her crew see her and trash talk her.
- Breath in... 1-2-3-4-5-6-7 Breath out ... 1-2-3-4-5-6-7
- I don't think you're going to win this time.
- Climax
- Just who did WIn?
- Just who did win
- Falling Action
- Even if I lost I can always retire as a runner and begin a whole new career as a coach with Raymond as my Champion
- In first place Miss Hazel Elizabeth Deborah Parker.
- Resolution
- Maybe were to busy being flowers or fairies or strawberries instead of something honest and worthy of respect you know like being people
- She's really fast
- Squeaky was ran the race vs Gretchen and the other girls and to her surprise Raymond ran the race. They have crossed the finish line and now waiting for who won
- Squeaky won the race. But looking at how Raymond was running and keeping up, she realized that he has talent and that she has many options on what to do in life while Raymond does not. She wanted Raymond to have something for himself and wants to help coach him.
- Squeaky and Gretchen smile to each other with genuine smiles and they gain respect for each other. Squeaky Appreciates how genuine she is and even thinks Gretchen could help her train Raymond. Theme: You should not pretend to be something, and be honest and genuine because that is what is truly deserves respect.
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