Feedback: Create Safety and Be Positive
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- How's your research paper coming along Aisha and Violet? Are either of you ready for me to look it over and give you some feedback, before you submit it?
- I'm ready to look it over with you, Ms. Mir. I'm done!
- I missed a work period, so I want to just finish researching today.
- Okay Aisha, I'm going to get you to share your doc with me, and then logout and meet me by the big table in front of the first book self. That way I can give you can ask me questions more comfortable, and I can give you feedback without all your other classmates hearing us.
- Violet, please let me know if you need me to review any research skills with you. I will go over what you have written by the end of the period tomorrow so you can get some feedback too!
- Okay.
- Sounds good, Ms. Mir. Thank you.
- Wow, Aisha! This looks great. You've done an excellent job formatting your document in MLA style, and you have incorporated some strong quotes to support your argument!
- One thing you can work on is adding in-text citations after your paraphrased information. Remember during my MLA lesson, I taught the class that even when the information is in your own words, it need an in-text citation? This is because we still need to give credit to the person who shared the information!
- Really?! Thank you!
- Oh yeah! I forgot about that. I can totally do that! Thank you, Ms. Mir!
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