Raymonds Run Storyboard that Project by Tomasz Ochedowski 3rd Period ELA
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- Exposition
- My name is Squeaky and this is my older brother Raymond and I always have to keep looking after him. I have a passion for running and my older brother Raymond has special needs.
- Rising Action
- Why am I always acting like a tomboy instead of a girl. its all my fault that I am this way, Gretchen is and will always be better than me!
- Climax
- I wonder what Gretchen is doing, I hope she is worrying about the race tomorrow. Tomorrows going to be a really fun day!
- Squeaky and her older brother Raymond live in New York. Squeaky has a passion of running and is commited to run and win every race against her competitors. Raymond has special needs and Squeaky is always there to help Raymond whenever he needs help and support.
- Falling Action
- Wow, I didn't know Raymond was a good runner, maybe he's better than me. I have to beat Gretchen!
- Squeaky has an internal conflict about herself and how she thinks herself as a "tomboy" who doesn't know how to smile in a manner that she means it. Squeaky is concerned that she isn't who she should actually be and is upset about it.
- Resolution
- Nice job Squeaky, you did really great!
- Thanks Gretchen for the complement, you also did great!
- Squeaky is talking about Gretchen and is thinking about talking to Gretchen and telling her that she will lose in the race however she rejects the thought and waits until she races her. Squeaky is mostly concerned about Gretchen since she's the only best competitor against Squeaky.
- Title/Name/Lesson Learned
- RAYMONDS RUNTomasz Ochedowski
- It is the day of the race and the announcer of the race really hopes for Squeaky to give anybody else a chance of winning however Squeaky rejects this proposal and the race begins until Squeaky sees Raymond climbing over the fence and realizing Raymond would be a good runner, Squeaky becomes the winner of the race and Gretchen and herself both smile at each other for their own respects.
- The end of the story concludes with Gretchen and Squeaky complementing each other for their effort in the race and Squeaky ultimately wins the race against Gretchen and the other competitors.
- The lesson learned in "Raymonds Run" is that your characteristics don't define who you are. Throughout the story, Squeaky is viewed as an arrogant person however towards the end she realizes that she doesn't have to be arrogant in order to be successful.
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