A Brother's Revenge
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- This is amazing, Dorena!
- Thanks!
- I'm running late...
- We have to go.
- INT. – KITCHEN – MORNINGJEFFREY (18) and DORENA (14) is almost done eating their breakfast at the dining table.
- . .
- I'll be home late today.
- INTERCUT: HALLWAYTheir father, KALI (42), got out of his room out into the hallway.
- Bye dad!
- Enjoy your day, kids!
- INT. – KITCHEN – MORNINGKali told Jeffrey and Dorena that they have to go because he is late to work.
- Flowchart Symbols
- The diamond represents a decision.
- INTERCUT: KITCHEN COUNTER Dorena grabbed her id on the kitchen counter and Kali grabbed the car keys almost simultaneously.
- Finally...
- Class dismissed.
- INT. – CAR (MOVING) – MORNINGKali is driving a little faster than normal. Jeffrey is on his phone and Dorena is looking outside the window of the car.
- ...
- Are you okay?
- What's going on over there?
- EXT. SCHOOL GROUNDS - MORNINGThey arrive at the school.
- INT. – CAR (STATIONARY) – MORNINGDorena told her dad that she'll be home late today because she has after-school practice.
- Someone grabbed my butt.
- What does he look like?
- EXT. SCHOOL GROUNDS - MORNINGJeffrey and Dorena got out of the car and said goodbye to their dad.
- I remember his face.
- Let me handle this.
- INT. - CLASSROOM - MORNINGJeffrey is in his class listening to his teacher.
- INT. - CLASSROOM - MORNINGThe teacher dismisses Jeffrey's class.
- INT. – SCHOOL HALLWAY - MORNINGJeffrey got out of his classroom and he notices a commotion at the end of the hallway.
- INT. – SCHOOL HALLWAY - MORNINGJeffrey got closer and saw that Dorena is crying which is the cause of the commotion.
- Dorena!!!
- INT. – SCHOOL HALLWAY - MORNINGJeffrey asked Dorena about what happened and she told him that a fellow student grabbed her butt.
- INT. – SCHOOL HALLWAY - MORNINGDorena told Jeffrey that she remembers his face. Jeffrey reassured Dorena that he will handle the situation.
- EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS OUTISDE THE EXIT - AFTERNOONThe final bell rang and students started coming out. Jeffrey and Dorena waited for the culprit to come out.
- Point him to me if you see him.
- EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS OUTISDE THE EXIT - AFTERNOONJeffrey and Dorena waited and waited, but the culprit was nowhere to be found.
- Looks like he's not coming out...
- EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS OUTISDE THE EXIT - AFTERNOONJeffrey and Dorena waited and waited, but the culprit was nowhere to be found.
- There he is!!!
- EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS OUTISDE THE EXIT - AFTERNOONJeffrey started sprinting towards him with no hesitation. He caught the culprit off-guard and smashed his bag on the side of the culprit’s head.
- I'm sorry!
- Apologize to my sister!
- That's enough...
- LOL
- Ding Dong
- There's been a change of plans.
- Hey kiddo! I thought you'll be home late today?
- EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS OUTISDE THE EXIT - AFTERNOONThe culprit was stunned and fell to the ground. Jeffrey then proceeded to kick him everywhere until he could not stand anymore. Dorena approached Jeffrey and stopped him.
- Hey bud. How was your day? Did anything interesting happen in school today?
- EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS OUTISDE THE EXIT - AFTERNOONJeffrey grabbed Dorena’s hand and just left the culprit lying on the ground.
- EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS - BUS STOP - AFTERNOONThe school bus just arrived and they rode it back home.
- INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGJeffrey is watching TV in the living room.
- Nothing interesting happened at all.
- INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGDorena is preparing dinner in the kitchen and she hears their doorbell ring.
- Is that so? Well let's go eat. Dorena prepared our dinner.
- INT. – HALLWAY - EVENINGKali just got home and was surprised that Dorena was there since she told him that she'll be home late.
- Wow! It's even better than our breakfast!
- Oh, stop.
- INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGJeffrey is watching TV in the living room.
- INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGJeffrey turned around unsure of his reply.
- INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGDorena winks at Jeffrey, signaling to not tell their father about the incident.
- INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGJeffrey got the message and told Kali that nothing interesting happened.
- INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGJeffrey is watching TV in the living room.
- INT. – KITCHEN – MORNINGThe family ate their dinner after a very long day for all of them.
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