Raymond's run plot
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- Introduction/Exposition
- My name is Hazel Elizabeth Deborah Parker (Aka Squeaky). I love to run. Here is My brother Raymond. Everyone says that I am older, but I am actually younger then him! I have to take care of him because he needs a little help.
- Hello my name is Raymond and I have a disability.
- Rising action (The part when they introduce the antagonist)
- you have such a big head Raymond ! (The antagonist Gretchen and Mary)Unlike you squeaky i have to get ready with my fancy things for the race i am going to. beat you in!
- Ugh why do you do this all the time! Stop talking about him and go through me.
- Huh??
- Rising action
- I know right she is so trash
- HA you so bad and you look mad dumb and watch me win the race the next day AHAHAH.
- Ugh you guys are such bullies and stop talking so much and fight me!
- Climax
- Man i hate this people expect me to do things that I do not want to do . I wish that i was in the country where it is relaxing.
- Falling Action
- ready for me to beat you in this race you loser! Just watch me beat you
- yea yea
- Lose so other people will play
- You did great
- Resolution
- I feel that iI should help Raymond out for him to be a good runner too!
- you did great too!!!
- Raymond'sRun
- that was pretty impressive I respect you for that.
- By:Nabil Islam
- The Moral of the story is to be who you are and not care what other people say about you
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