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- There was once a homeAction: A girl stares out the window. A thin transparent curtain hides her silhouette while the breeze from the wind outside catches the curtain. Group Convo: Can we achieve by utilizing a fan? The camera subtly pushes in.
- Crystal Windows, A sweet sun fireplace and made with careEvery detail was intricateCombo: Window and Fireplace Action:collage of images flashing on the screen back to back; showcasing both the girl and the home as one Group Convo: 1) Should the execution be a flash of images or side by side collage 2)image ideas that compare the house and Eve?
- Even the brick used to build the base was cemented with vanilla and lavender So that her rooms brought enough comfort for any stranger to feel at peace enough to make this house into their homeAction: Jump cut to a split screen. On the left, we pan left to right as the cement is being spread over the bricks. On the right, we tilt up as the girl put lotion on her legs and body stopping before revealing her face Group convo: Should we will do movement in post to match the speed?
- Her kitchen equipped with warm firebrick, pristine china plates, and sleek finishes that made even the most novice cooks want to put up their cereal bowls and whip up something more complex in tasteAction: Gimbale tracking shot around the kitchen. On the last line, the camera spots the girl; in the corner of the kitchen; with her back turned she turns to reveal a beautiful meal.
- A vase in the center of it all filled with treasured diamonds and rubiesAction: We start with 2 side-by-side shots of similar-looking diamonds placed behind 2 different backgrounds. The shot on the left zooms out to reveal the diamonds around the girl's neck. While the shot on the right zooms out to reveal the diamonds in the vase Group convo: Should we will do movement in post to match the speed?
- Her living room built with a family in mind held a massive cloud couch draped in beautiful quilts and pillowsAction: The camera captures an extreme CU tracking shot. We see the details of the couch and the girl lays on it leaving gaps of empty spaces around her
- She was perfectly designed and yet made with everyone in mindAction: The girl stares out the window. A thin transparent curtain hides her silhouette while the breeze from the wind outside catches the curtain ;Group Convo: Can we achieve by utilizing a fan? ;Eve turns around and draws back the curtain that was hiding her silhouette to reveal her face.
- There was also a man. He had been by a few times. He'd walked her halls and fell in love with her detailsCombo: of man 1st time seeing Eve is a oner Action: A) Close-up of the man's shoes as he walks towards the home. He walks with power and confidence in perfect rhythm with the instrumental playing in the background (Shift in music to introduce this character) B) Medium shot of the man opening the door to the home C) The man walks down the halls feeling and examining the structure of the home. The woman walks around the corner and the two meet for the first time, the man stops in his tracks.
- And when he had finally saved enough, he moved inHe tended to the home, polished her finishing, careful to make sure to keep things the same way he found them. Combo: David's face reveal and couple montage ;Actions: A) The shot reveals David's face. He drops his suitcase and they embrace Zooming out B) Timelapse jumps, the camera stays put in the same spot and we see the man tending to the home and women. Painting the walls, giving her flowers, framing a painting, and cuddling on the couch. Cuddling on the couch transitions from this scene to the next put displays it in a new POV. Group Convo: Brainstorm with the group what are some things we can do to show couples closeness
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- His career taking off,Action: The man is in a haste he grabs his coffee and briefcase and gives the woman a quick kiss before heading out the door. She cracks a small smile and watches him leave the camera and transitions to this next scene with a whiplash pan effect Group Convo: This shot and the next need to be combined. how can we do this? The purpose of both shots is to show David being pulled in by the distractions of life and away from Eve
- Action: Gone girl-style oner; A) David Eve lay together on the couch. B) The word family in the poem materializes two children playing in the foreground. Eve looks up at David and smiles. On the line with 20 more years, the children in the foreground disappear. On the line But he was young the man's phone rings C) On the line Well-intentioned he kisses her forehead, but young he gets up from the coach and the camera tracks him as he finds a corner to take his call. He loved the idea he smiles at her from across the room. His face shift as something is said on the phone and he walks out of the room in haste the camera follows him. The camera swipes and transitions into the next scene, We start to pick up a fast pace.
- He could see a future, a family. She too had built the future memories between her walls and with 20 more years to his age, those memories would have been made. But he was young. Well-intentioned, but young. He loved the idea of settling down and finding the one, but his desires were much wilder.
- The parties and number of women grew largerAction: The man is raising a toast with colleagues from this job. His eyes scan to other women as the woman watches him from the corner. The camera swipes and transitions into the next scene,
- Things changed with the late nights and earlier mornings. He was barely ever home and when he was, his hands moved carelessly. He no longer polished and scrubbed but tinkered and wiped. Rather than tending to her, He'd opted to fix it later, and the 20-year mark hit-Action: Rotating tracking; The couple sits across from each other as each rotation passes the couple grows distant there's more space between the 2 and David becomes increasingly distracted. On the line, He was barely ever home the man disappears from the chair for a moment. Eve and the home around her become dirtier and neglected. The camera rotation come to a sudden stop with the word Hit
- He left her with the words 'I think it's time we splitAction: The camera rapidly zooms across the room to his chair and closes in on his words and mouth. The man's face is hidden from this point on.
- He packed his bagsAction: Close-up of the man picking up his bags
- and left her quiet ;Abandoned by the only one she ever knew, he took her years and left her usedCombo- David leaving, door slamming and camera rotating to show Eve Action: A)The man walks outside of the door from which he first came. Eve follows him and the camera pushes in. B)The door slams, there is a beat, and the camera does a circular pan from the door to where Eve is standing across the way. Feeling defeated she drops to the ground. The camera begins to tighten in on her face. Transition to the next shot by maintaining the camera position and Eve's position
- She was of course, still beautiful and perfectly made, but also dated by age.Action: The camera continues to push in and then comes to stop, there is a beat before we see a crossfade revealing a slightly older woman with bags and wrinkles and a defeated face.
- Her features could no longer holdAction: Eve struggles to get off the ground and open the door outside
- a flame to the luxury homes newly built todayAction: She opens the door and looks outside. Using a rack focus we move past Eve and focus in on a younger woman walking ahead. We hear the distant sound of her heels clicking as she walks Group Convo- Should this be through glass instead?
- And in his own time, he had found the one. And they had found a home--Action: The camera zooms in and pushes past the woman entirely and we see the man enter the frame, he and the woman hold hands in front of the home
- The home she would never beAction: The camera quickly zooms out to reveal the women again. After the woman is revealed the camera quickly tracks her back into the home, we follow as she swiftly runs back into the home and the door slams shut.
- Days passed, nights dipped in moonlight weeks strung along and months fluttered onAction: A butterfly comes in from the window and guides us through the empty home. In the last room, the butterfly spots Eve and rests on her shoulder before flying away. A butterfly can be created with after effects. Group Convo-Can anyone do this if not what is another alternative for the passing of time
- Left with her lonely and fed up by the nothingness, she decided- to unlock her doors to allSplit: Use an insert of the door handle and add them together in post with the whip pan.Action: The camera starts wide and zooms into Eve, a faint ringing is heard in the background. The zoom-in stops at She decided Eve turns her head towards the door and the camera whips to the door revealing a close-up of the lock. The lock turns on its own door cracks open.
- Men lined in the night and switched out with others in the dayActions: Close-up of a line of men and their shoes. We see some waiting to get in and some walking out of the home.
- And for a while, she felt okay; The new voices coming and going distracted her.New Shot Idea Action: Medium shot of Eve sitting on the staircase. The camera is front forward and the staircase railing asks like a prison. The shadows of the men bounce off of eve as she scans the room in amazement. A hand enters the frame Eve looks up and takes the hand and stands up outside of the frame. In the background sound of this shot we hear the men partying and laughing. Group Convo: This may need to be shot at night for shadows
- New and exciting faces kept her mind occupied so well that she didn't realize the missing pieces, the broken dishes, and The cracked vase in the center of it allCombo: 1st interaction with men and insert shots. Action: The 2 men on her side approach her and we hear faint male voices in the background. She is gleeful and laughing. The shot slowly pushes out to reveal the messy home. This can be shot at the top of the stairs so that we get a wide ariel view of the messy home. Group Convo: How many male extras will we need?
- Until she did. She noticed the...Action: Eve and a man are sitting on the couch laughing. He reaches for her hand and slyly slips off her bracelet. Everything begins to slow to 1/2 times speed. Idea: Potential for a lighting/ mood shift here
- Stains and...Action: Close-up of an abandoned wine glass on the carpet
- Bruises they leftAction: Eve swivels her head to examine her arm and finds bruises on it. And turns her head across the way to transition to the next scene.
- She watched as they walked out with pieces of her room.Action: Eve watches as the faceless men carry out furniture from the home. The camera picks up on the men moving the furniture through Eve's iris. Her eyes scan the room with worry as the camera zooms into her eyes. transition crossfade from the eyes in this scene to the eyes in the next scene
- Stayed silent as they came in andAction: The camera zooms out of Eve's eyes revealing that she is in bed covered by a blanket
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- Enjoyed the best parts of her. - And leftbefore the sun made its way back up. Though she was never left aloneCombo: Men coming and leaving the bedroom Action: The camera captures eve and a man from outside the bedroom. The faceless man buttons up his pants and runs out of the room while Eve lies in bed. Eve sits up in the bed and turns her head towards the door where the man left. Another man enters the room and slams the door behind him.
- She could once again feel the lonelyAction: The camera a close-up of her face. Eve cries as the faceless man kisses her neck and shoulders
- Greeted each day by her only companion: empty. Who left this unexplainable eeriness about her that left creaks in her doors and floorboardsAction: In a close-up of Eve's feet getting out of bed, a white fog creeps from under the bed and follows her steps. She opens the door to walk out onto the hallway and we hear creaking with every step
- Her whispers carriedAction: Extreme close of eve's mouth whispering and a faint ringing is heard. The camera whips around in front of her.
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- https://pixabay.com/en/red-wine-splash-pour-out-spray-1004259/ - Quadronet_Webdesign - (رخصة Free for Commercial Use / No Attribution Required (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0) )
- 1684152 - Daria Obymaha - (رخصة Free To Use / No Attribution Required / See https://www.pexels.com/license/ for what is not allowed )
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