Murphy's Law - Part 1
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- 6:28 am
- Goddamn it, I’m probably going to be late for work again...
- I mean, this isn’t even my fault! I went to bed at a decent time last night...
- Claire is walking swiftly on the street. Long shot and establishing shot.
- COFFEE CART
- Closeup as Claire looks at her watch.
- See, it isn’t even my fault. If Amy didn’t need to make sweet love to her ugly ass boyfriend at 2 am
- Close up on Claire, from the front, as we begin to hear her thoughts. This shot continues until she sighs and rolls her eyes.
- I wish I had a lover, or at least an excuse to make sweet love twice in one night....
- Back into a medium long shot while her thoughts continue. After she talks about watching Daria before bed, Claire looks to her right.
- What am I thinking? A lover? The last girl I slept with made fun of the way I color-coordinated my closet...
- Medium shot eyeline match of coffee cart setting up on the side of the street.
- Back into a medium long shot while her thoughts continue. Stay here until after she glances at watch again. No close up of watch. Stay here until her complaints about Amy are finished.
- See, it isn’t even my fault. If Amy didn’t need to make sweet love to her ugly ass boyfriend at 2 am
- Closeup on Claire as she starts to complain about not having a lover.
- Continue the closeup while she remembers that lovers suck and she becomes more annoyed. She looks at her watch.
- I’m almost to the cafe but this lady is giving me the creeps. Is she coming for me?
- Closeup of the time of the watch. As Claire puts her hand down, The Woman can be seen in a bit of a distance.
- 6:29 am
- Back to the medium closeup as Claire notices the woman in the distance.
- View after watch is down. The Woman, black ball cap, clutching a purse.
- Medium closeup of Claire thinking about this woman who is giving her the creeps.
- HAHAHAHA
- Look! I have messy hair and a purple unicorn shirt my niece gave me for my last birthday.
- Medium closeup still as Claire laughs at her thoughts.
- Okay, I do think she thinks coming for me.
- Medium closeup as Claire laughs at her thoughts...and pan
- to Claire's shirt as she thinks about it.
- AHHHHHHHHHHH
- In the name of the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit! CLEANSE THIS WOMAN FROM HER LUSTFUL WAYS!
- Reverse shot to show the woman has gotten closer to passing Claire on the sidewalk.
- AHHHHHH
- Back to closeup as Claire starts to think the woman is coming for her.
- I’m not in pain so this can’t be poison or acid. Okay, it is just water I think. But it...
- Reverse shot to show the woman is super close and is coming for Claire. Claire's VO can be heard but the woman is seen.
- This smells like roses. Wait, did that woman say to cleanse me? Of lustful ways? My LUSTFUL ways? WHAT LUSTFUL WAYS?!
- Medium closeup from the side as the liquid from The Woman's object falls on her. She screams. The Woman says her line
- Medium shot as Claire continues to scream and dance around. The Woman can be seen running off.
- Claire starts to calm down. She realizes she's not in pain. She touches her face to and brings the liquid to her nose to smell.
- Close up on Claire as she realizes the sweet smell and the blessing The Woman said might mean she was just splashed with holy water.
- She turns to see if the woman is there and she's not.
- Back to medium shot as Claire feels her phone vibrate and grabs her pocket.
- NOTIFICATION FROMBOSS
- Where the f*** are you?
- 6:32 am
- Did he really just swear at me like that? One minute after I was supposed to be there? Dear God, oh
- Get it cause you’re covered in holy water, Claire, so God.
- Closeup on Claire's phone and the text from the Boss
- Claire is frustrated because of the text but that turns to....
- ...laugh because of the joke in her head. She then realizes she needs to run to work.
- Long shot as Claire runs into the door of the cafe.
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