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Sir, I have been an honest worker in this office since 1996. You know me well, and I never ask you for anything. I'm willing to take any risk for this company.

I want to send my older daughter to London before she gets married, and I want to move my younger daughter to a better school.

I've got two daughters. The elder is getting married, and the younger has just graduated from high school. They are exceptionally bright, and I intend to invest more in their education.

I don't have time for your rambling rants. You must leave immediately or

What exactly did I do?

Please accept my apologies,

Good morning, sir. I'd like to take my family on a foreign trip. Can I get a loan?

Sure thing! Bring the tickets for confirmation tomorrow, and that much money will be given to you.

Thankyou sir!

I successfully completed it! It was so simple to persuade our boss.

How did you accomplish that? I was also requesting advance payment, however..

Don't hide your feelings! Be "CLEAR" and "CONCISE."

We should keep our message brief. It should be exhaustive!

Always Concise and be clear!

So, dear ladies, what's the lesson from my experience?